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Before subwoofers, x box, face book and iPads we walked through the neighborhood with our heads up noticing nature, people and sounds. Melodies wafted from the porch as someone strummed a guitar, a voice lifted in song, kids laughed and played while dogs barked and chased. My happy sound is the music made by ice tea spoons swirling the sweet elixir to temper the heat of the day. The tinkling clinks poured through an open window followed by the squeak-slap-slap of the screen door. Sometimes I could hear the chirp of wood against wood of the porch swing and rocker before story time began. Happy sounds. What’s your happy sound?

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Hume hiked past lower town to the caves. He suspected he was being followed.  Trusting naught, he double around, retraced his steps.  He came to the caves midmorning but didn’t want to go straight in.  He climbed a distant chinaberry tree and scouted the area.  In a bit there was a rustling at the entrance of the cave.  He watched without showing himself.  Cardova exited the cave in a huddled low to the ground lugging something of weight.  Hume waited in silence.  Cardova stopped, looked around.

Hume observed a while longer.  Cardova made no other strange moves.  Hume decided to perchance a greeting.   He picked up a few stones and began to whistle a tune.  He threw the stones at passing birds as if in fun,  surprising himself when he struck one. Feathers floated to the ground as the bird recovered.   At this, Cardova shouted, “Is that the best you can do?”

“Well, what are you up to way out here?”

“I could inquire the same of you.  But figured you would arrive before sunset.”
“Why do you say such?”

“The orbs.  I saw you with Evie. I watched when you learned they attracted one another.  I came to the caves to  determine the significance of the markings.”

“Whatever are you talking about, orbs, markings?”

“Hume, don’t take me for a fool.  Renaissance draws each of us.   We must be on our guard.”

“I don’t follow.  Do you mean there is some destiny for which we have arrived together at Renaissance?”

“Exactly! ”

“I met you on the way as we did Evie.  Now you mention the orbs as though you have knowledge of them.  Explain.”

“I don’t believe you continue to act so.  To much has been revealed to keep the secret.”

“Ah, now, you mention secrets, do you.  What secrets do you have? Your words and bundle pique my curiosity.  What is that?”

“It’s the key to the markings in the cave.  I was poking around markings on the boulders.  I searched them to no avail.  A distraction.  I moved the smaller of the boulders revealing a hatch.  I pulled the slatted cover away, took my torch and went down.  The log was there.  Look at this.”
“Hume came close to have a look.  Coardova unwrapped the end of a log. Hume knelt.  Cardova then struck Hume at the back of the head with a club.  Hume collapsed.  Cardova took the orbs from around Hume’s neck, then drug him to the cave and dumped him into the hatch. He replaced the cover and the boulders.  “Sleep long, Traveler.”  Cardova pulled a small pouch from a leather tie on his his belt.  He retrieved the third orb.  “What a beauty.”  He knew he had to keep the three apart until the time was right.

Evie saw him come back to the Inn carrying a load.  “Hello,  I haven’t seen much of you since we arrived.  What do you have there?”

“The key, dear Evie, the key.”

“The key to what?”

“They key to unravel the fold.”

“You say the oddest things, Cardova.”  Evie moved away.  She didn’t want him to know she knew of what he spoke.  “Have you seen Hume?”

“With you this morning.  Why, isn’t he around?”

“No, I haven’t seen him the rest of the day.  I need to talk to him.”

“Think that over, Evie.  Are you sure it’s not me with whom you wish to speak?”

“There you go again, saying the oddest things again.”

Hume hiked past lower town to the caves. He suspected he was being followed.  Trusting naught, he double around, retraced his steps.  He came to the caves midmorning but didn’t want to go straight in.  He climbed a distant chinaberry tree and scouted the area.  In a bit there was a rustling at the entrance of the cave.  He watched without showing himself.  Cardova exited the cave in a huddled low to the ground lugging something of weight.  Hume waited in silence.  Cardova stopped, looked around.

Hume observed a while longer.  Cardova made no other strange moves.  Hume decided to perchance a greeting.   He picked up a few stones and began to whistle a tune.  He threw the stones at passing birds as if in fun,  surprising himself when he struck one. Feathers floated to the ground as the bird recovered.   At this, Cardova shouted, “Is that the best you can do?”

“Well, what are you up to way out here?”

“I could inquire the same of you.  But figured you would arrive before sunset.”
“Why do you say such?”

“The orbs.  I saw you with Evie. I watched when you learned they attracted one another.  I came to the caves to  determine the significance of the markings.”

“Whatever are you talking about, orbs, markings?”

“Hume, don’t take me for a fool.  Renaissance draws each of us.   We must be on our guard.”

“I don’t follow.  Do you mean there is some destiny for which we have arrived together at Renaissance?”

“Exactly! ”

“I met you on the way as we did Evie.  Now you mention the orbs as though you have knowledge of them.  Explain.”

“I don’t believe you continue to act so.  To much has been revealed to keep the secret.”

“Ah, now, you mention secrets, do you.  What secrets do you have? Your words and bundle pique my curiosity.  What is that?”

“It’s the key to the markings in the cave.  I was poking around markings on the boulders.  I searched them to no avail.  A distraction.  I moved the smaller of the boulders revealing a hatch.  I pulled the slatted cover away, took my torch and went down.  The log was there.  Look at this.”
“Hume came close to have a look.  Coardova unwrapped the end of a log. Hume knelt.  Cardova then struck Hume at the back of the head with a club.  Hume collapsed.  Cardova took the orbs from around Hume’s neck, then drug him to the cave and dumped him into the hatch. He replaced the cover and the boulders.  “Sleep long, Traveler.”  Cardova pulled a small pouch from a leather tie on his his belt.  He retrieved the third orb.  “What a beauty.”  He knew he had to keep the three apart until the time was right.

 

Evie saw him come back to the Inn carrying a load.  “Hello,  I haven’t seen much of you since we arrived.  What do you have there?”

“The key, dear Evie, the key.”

“The key to what?”

“They key to unravel the fold.”

“You say the oddest things, Cardova.”  Evie moved away.  She didn’t want him to know she knew of what he spoke.  “Have you seen Hume?”

“With you this morning.  Why, isn’t he around?”

“No, I haven’t seen him the rest of the day.  I need to talk to him.”

“Think that over, Evie.  Are you sure it’s not me with whom you wish to speak?”

“There you go again, saying the oddest things again.”

576 words for Prompt Three:

  1. Betrayal is in the air.  
  2. Relationships unravel or strengthen.

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Thanks to the hosts for creating the Rule of Three Blogfest!

Part Two of   Folds of Time

Orbs

Entering Renaissance, the threesome  headed to the Inn.

“A room, if you please,” said Evie.  The barmaid looked her over with a grimmance.

“ Two quags and a tork.   A week is twelve quags and includes a bread with tea breakfast.”

“Five quags? Steep, you think?”

“A week is tweleve qauag.  Your choice, Mim,” answered the barmaid.

“Is there work?  Need a baker, perchance?”

“See the proprietor.”

“Here’s five.  Bring fresh water to the room and tea,”  Evie slid an extra tork across the bar.  The maid snatched it up, “Right away, Mim.  I’ll get it for ya.”

“I see you made a bit of a wager.”  said Hume.

“Slept on the rocks long enough.  A lady needs a softer place to lay her head from time to time.”

“A lady you are, then?”  Hume teased.

“Don’t be disappointed so, yet, traveler.  You know naught of me.  Take your leave . I want my sleep.”  With that Evie followed the barmaid to the top of the steps.  She leaned over the rail, “Tomorrow will bring promises.”

“Well, if she isn’t full of herself,” commented Cordova.

“Naught to make of her, you know.  Four days travel, brief conversations and I have no clue about the woman, yet she is familiar.”

“Ah, you say that as though you have expectation.  Careful with that.  First sign of danger, you know, is having expectation of a woman.  Much less of one you don’t know,”  Cardova warned.

“There is something about her.  She is distant but I know her; nothing tangible, a feeling for sure,”  he offered.  “Time to retire myself but these prices are above me.  I seek a bit of hay in the stable.  And you? ”

“Never mind about me.   Good sleep, traveler,” Coardova left Hume to his thoughts.

Dawn found Evie shaping loaves of dough behind the Inn.  An agreeable negotiation made she set to task. Several loaves were 6reeprepared ready for the village oven when Coardova approached.

“Good morning, Evie.  Sleep well?”

“Like a babe in arms.  Had your breakfast?”

“No, I am off to find work.  Someone must need a builder.”  This place is still in cinged disarray. Save me a bread, won’t you?”

Evie toted the bread board to the village ovens. A man loitered, mumbling,  “She bakes secrets into her breads. The history of Renaissance.”

“What is you you tell, Sir?” she asked.

“Return and renewal. Return and renewal.  From the cave, the  markings tell of the legend.  Marks  on your bread are of the missing.”  The man placed a stone in Evie’s hand and walked away.  Her bones trembled; a vision came to her. A face, someone she knew  but didn’t recognize. Pressing a orb in her hand then pushing her into a darkness behind a stone saying, “Stay here child, be safe.”  Evie stood frozen in the grip of the vision without knowing its meaning.  She mumbled words,  “Given only a talisman, for the future, a reunion with the other.”  Cold sweat dotted her skin. She heard herself mumble.  Hume’s greeting startled her from her trance.  She held out her hand to show Him the stone the man placed in her palm.  “Look.”

He noticing the marks on the stone.  He brought it close to inspect and was surprised that is smacked to his tunic.  Tugging did not break the attraction.   Sharing energy, the two pieces were inseparable.  Hume stared. She returned a perplexed gaze.  Could this be?  Now?  Only the secret explained the attracting orbs.  His sister?  So long ago.   Nothing was as it seemed yesterday.

 Prompt:A relationship becomes complicated;  600 words 

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Week #1 post for Rule of Three:

Folds of Time

Ch 1  An Unlikely Trio

Hume had paused at the stream, he wasn’t alone.  “At what is it you stare, man?”

“Forgive me.  It is your horse at which I gaze.  A beauty indeed.  A pleasure it would be to ride upon a horse for I have been walking these many days and the soles of my feet are split.”

“Do you have a name? “

“I am Cordova, the carpenter.  You?”

“I am Hume.    Both my horse and I are starved.  Might you have some food to share?  For a meal of  bread and cheese, I would allow you to ride as far as we travel in the same direction. Where is it you go?”

“I have no bread.  Only bits of old cheese and dried berries, you are welcome to.  I go to Renaissance, the town of woe.”

“Share your cheese; I seek Renaissance myself.”

The carpenter handed over the parcel of cheese and a wrap of berries.  The men perched on the bank talking.

“Tell me of this Renaissance Town.  Why did you call it town on woe?

“Oh, it has met with many fates over the ages.  I hear, it revives again and is in need of a carpenter. The forest is near and shall supply materials for my craft.  I go to build.  For what are you taken to the long road of travel?”

“Ah, to make my fortune.  I too, heard Renaissance was breathing life again.  Bringing in travelers and trades; there should be treasures to be found, and captured. Nourished, we can be on our way.”

“Forgive me, but you seek treasures and riches.  Are you a knight or a thief?”

Hume laughed.  Ah, I am only a traveller.

Both mounted the horse and headed in the direction of Renaissance.

Hours later, far from the stream and its cooling waters, the men grew weary and stopped to camp.  The carpenter gathered bits of wood and branch for the campfire.    No food for a meal, only their stomachs spoke through a sleepless night.

Hume awoke to a wonderful aroma. Something sweetened the air.  He roused the carpenter, “What do you smell,  friend?  Dare I dream of warm bread?”

“No,  from where does it come?”

They gathered a pitiful collection of belongings and dusted out the fire.  The horse came willingly with a tug at the reins.

The men came to find a thin trickle of smoke spiraling into the air.  No one around and no campfire.

“What do you make of this? Hume asked.
“A cave.  Someone is cooking in a nearby cave.  Here this way.”   Cardova parted the bushes seeking an entrance.

“And who are you snooping about?” came  a voice.

They both turned to take in a sight to behold, a red-haired vixen in a protective stance showing the hilt of a dagger tucked at her waist.

“We bring you no harm.  We followed the aroma of fresh baked bread.

“Lady, we beg of you, with nothing to trade, please share your bread.  We are ravenous.”

“You do, do you? With nothing to trade, you wish my charity?’

“No charity, Lady,  but promises to honor and protect you for a period of time which you name.” Hume felt his gut tighten and  gave no thought to Cardova.

Evie stood silent in thought.  “I travel to Renaissance.  I have come a long way through the hills. Beat off the mongrels who paw at me.  I give you this loaf to share.   We must get to Renaissance.”

And this is how the  threesome came to be, entering Renaissance together, unknowing what awaits each.

600 words

impending misfortune

 

 

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Stuart has created a joint writing challenge called Rule of Three.  There are some guidelines to follow which you can find on his site  http://stuartnager.wordpress.com/the-rules-of-three-blog-fest/.

You will find my story posts here at Talespinner at Work.  Come by often to see what happens with the characters and check out the other participants as well.  twitter about your favorite ones, like it on Facebook and make comments for the various writers.

This is a great challenge to loosen up the story muscles as NanoWriMo nears!

Thanks, Stuart and to your host mates.  I look forward to the fun, challenge and outcomes.

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http://www.acreativewritersworkshop.blogspot.com for Tuesday Morning Writings with my writing buds, Judy and gaelikka.  There you will find links to each of our weekly short stories based on a photo prompt.  At A Creative Writers’ Workshop we read and critique for one another, offer tips on writing skills and techniques, we share favorite writing sites and/or blogs.  Come on along our journey, read, write, critique.  We hope to stimulate the muse in you as we respond to the muse in each of us.

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